The wind slithers through the bamboo
whispering a sweet love song in my ears
Eastern sea provides the deep bass kaboomshhhh roar
of the chorus line in the background
Everything mixing into one whirring hum of life around me
and the sun gingerly darts through the cascading leaves
creating quivering, criss-crossing patterns of light across the earth
as if to say "I am here now and forever"
and I can't help but have the feeling of sunny, summer, Saturday afternoons back home
whn the sun kisses the maple and oak
and the only thing I have to do is be alive
and life is good

Nice- I assume if you put this to music you'll have bits coming in as you describe them? That would be cool.

I liked it all, except the last line.

i really enjoyed it, i can feel the same yearning for the carefree summer lifestyle. I dont necessarily dislike the last line because it kind of takes on a carefree style or causual with little stress. The ending kind of fades instead of "punching" you and leaving you awestruck. I will admit though that it is different than the rest of it.